i need you to edit this paper

/in /by

SO I NEED YOU TO EDIT AND WRITE A RESULT/CONCLUSION SECTION ABOUT TOPIC THAT I ALREADY WROTE ABOUT IT

THE TOPIC IS

(
how men’s and women’s brain

different
) ATTACHED 1 IS the one you are going to write the

disscusion
 about it and conclusion I already wrote one paper about the result and I need you to edit it and add more from attached 1

HERE IS THE COMMNETS I NEED YOU TO ADD TO THE DISSCUSION SECTION.

Extending a paper usually means thinking about organizing a paper. Right now you have one paragraph that states your position and gives information about relative brain sizes, and another one about gender-related “differences” being more cultural than biological.

I’d like to see you break out the first paragraph into two. The first could really be just a sentence or two that identifies your argument. The second would be a more specific discussion of the differences in size between male and female brains — you had lots of good specific details, with numerical data and specific locations in the brain. These would be very appealing to your intended audience.

Then you would spend another paragraph identifying the reasons why you don’t see those physical distinctions as being important (something you’ve mentioned earlier). You wrote in earlier work on this paper about the variations between individual brains and why that is more important that gender-based distinctions. That would be appropriate to both your audience and your position, and it would allow you to offer more evidence, increasing your credibility and the reader’s confidence in your argument.


** LOOK ON ATTACHED 3 AND EDIT IT BASED ON ATTACHED 2 AND ADD MORE FROM ATTACHED 1.

RRRR IS ATTACHED 1

SCREENSHOOT ARE ATTACHED 2

DDDD IS ATTACHED 3.


 
Do you need a similar assignment done for you from scratch? We have qualified writers to help you. We assure you an A+ quality paper that is free from plagiarism. Order now for an Amazing Discount!
Use Discount Code "Newclient" for a 15% Discount!

NB: We do not resell papers. Upon ordering, we do an original paper exclusively for you.