english essay final draft
Instructions and final writing assignment instructions are attached, which include instructor comments.
Additional feedback from Professor:
Feedback to Learner8/26/18 11:23 PM
It’s lovely to see how your argument has come together. Please look at my embedded comments on the paper itself carefully. As solid as your writing is, I would like to see you phrase your words where you’re making a persuasive argument rather than sharing information. Outside of that, just focus on polishing up your paragraphs. Outstanding job.