research paper revision 2

Please help e to revise the research paper by viewing the professor’s feedback.

I will attached the first draft and the requirement of the research paper below.

Professor’s feedback:

This is well researched. There are some grammatical issues, some of which I’ve noted. Some statements need a citation and in some cases the statements are unclear or too vague (these are noted in my comments). Please make the noted additions and corrections.

 
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