its due one hour i need help

I need to edit the paper I’m attaching for the final Draft. please the teacher comments below to help you knowing what i want..

 

Teacher comments:

The main issue is that you are often more informative than descriptive. There is some sensory imagery throughout, but for the most part, the essay is devoted to telling the reader why spaghetti is your favorite food.”

 

I need a reflicton paper over the essay i am attaching here too.

It should be 300 words.

 
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