i need help my hw

I wrote a reserch and i have some notes I need you to add these notes to the paper that I’m going to to attatch for you and the notes are: 

 

– your title is working pretty well . . . can you add some creativity to it?

– your examples and sources are used effectively

– your in-text citations are nice (there are just a few issues with the MLA, but it really strong overall)

– try adding a few more transitions between ideas, sentences, and/or paragraphs

– keep working and you should do well on this paper

 
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